32. Third Draft- More changes to my front cover

As you can hopefully notice I have made a few changes to my front cover, mainly neatened it up and made the cover look more professional and sleek. I have moved all the images and features onto the left hand side of the page as I feel this connotes a magazine front cover more. I have also moved the barcode up to underneath the main sub-heading and the price is now clearly stated as I feel it looked too cluttered at the bottom of the page. I have also moved what was originally in a text box about the main cover story "Gee's Secrets, Scandals and Saucy Tips", I thought it would be a nice and personal touch to the magazine to slant the text and put it across her arm. I feel this is slightly breaking the magazine conventions as I have never seen it done before however I like that about my magazine as I want it to have a bit of an attitude as that is the flavour of RnB music. 
Tell me what you think??